Shloka 67.18Unverified draft

तस्य शब्दो महानासीत् निर्घातसमनिस्वन:। भूमिकम्पश्च सुमहान् पर्वतस्येव दीर्यत:

Meaning

It generated a loud sound like the clap of thunder, like the trembling of the earth and the splitting of a mountain.

Word-by-word (pada-artha)

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
tasya śabdaḥ mahān āsītतस्य शब्दः महान् आसीत्its sound was greatGenitive / Nominative / Nominative / Verb (imperfect)
nirghāta-sama-nisvanaḥनिर्घात-सम-निस्वनःresembling the roar of a thunderboltNominative
bhūmi-kampaḥ ca su-mahānभूमि-कम्पः च सु-महान्and a very great trembling of the earthNominative / Adverbial / Nominative
parvatasya iva dīryataḥपर्वतस्य इव दीर्यतःas of a mountain splittingGenitive / Comparative / Genitive (participle)

Scholar commentary

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

The source identifies the explosive sound of the bow's breaking as the primordial syllable 'Om' -- the sound once produced by Shiva's drum to convey the maheshvara sutras, sounds so subtle that even sages like Sanaka and Sanandana needed Nandi, Shiva's bull, to decipher them; ordinary people, unaccustomed to such sound, experience it as a deafening blast, which is why everyone but Vishvamitra, Janaka, Rama, and Lakshmana swoons. It cites a Yajur Veda passage on Shiva's peace-bestowing names: namaH shambhave ca mayo bhave ca namaH shankaraaya ca mayaskaraaya ca namaH shivaaya ca shivataraaya ca. The source further maps the bow's three physical parts onto the three syllables of 'Om' -- the upper piece as 'a' (Vishnu), the lower piece as 'u' (Lakshmana or any devoted adherent), and the bowstring as 'ma' (Goddess Lakshmi, forever clinging to the Supreme Person) -- with a fuller account of this symbolism cross-referenced to Aranya Kanda 3.11.1.

1 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Reference: 1.67.18 · Bāla Kāṇḍa