Shloka 69.9-10Unverified draft

उवाच च नरश्रेष्ठो नरश्रेष्ठं मुदाऽन्वित:। स्वागतं ते महाराज दिष्ट्या प्राप्तोऽसि राघव। पुत्रयोरुभयो: प्रीतिं लप्स्यसे वीर्यनिर्जिताम्।

Meaning

The joyful Janaka said: 'Welcome, great king! By good fortune you have come, O descendant of Raghu; you shall know the joy of both your sons having won their brides through valour.'

Word-by-word (pada-artha)

Shloka 1.69.9

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
uvāca ca nara-śreṣṭhaḥउवाच च नर-श्रेष्ठःand the best of men saidVerb (imperfect) / Adverbial / Nominative
nara-śreṣṭham mudā anvitaḥनर-श्रेष्ठम् मुदा अन्वितःto the best of men, filled with joyAccusative / Instrumental / Nominative

Shloka 1.69.10

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
svāgatam te mahā-rājaस्वागतम् ते महा-राजwelcome to you, O great kingNominative / Genitive / Vocative
diṣṭyā prāptaḥ asi rāghavaदिष्ट्या प्राप्तः असि राघवby good fortune you have arrived, O descendant of RaghuInstrumental / Nominative / Verb (present) / Vocative
putrayoḥ ubhayoḥ prītimपुत्रयोः उभयोः प्रीतिम्the joy of both your sonsGenitive dual / Genitive dual / Accusative
lapsyase vīrya-nirjitāmलप्स्यसे वीर्य-निर्जिताम्you shall obtain, won by valorVerb (future, middle) / Accusative

Scholar commentary

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

The source notes that although Rama alone broke Shiva's bow, Janaka's words here credit both sons with the feat. This is explained as a recurring unified laudation for the brothers' inseparable bond -- the same pattern recurs later when Lakshmana alone disfigures Shurpanakha, yet both brothers are said to have done it.

1 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Reference: 1.69.9-10 · Bāla Kāṇḍa